abdul razaq

Rookie - 0 Points (august 10,1971 / faisalabad, pakistan)

Comments about abdul razaq

  • Katie Badham (2/26/2010 5:38:00 AM)

    I love your work, so moving..keep it up, your are being noticed by everyone....

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  • Serota Vpp (4/22/2008 11:51:00 PM)

    All poem are great. The poet has a lot to say and he knows how to do it. Well done!

  • Chom Chom (4/15/2008 9:21:00 AM)

    No rhymes, no frame of words but strong words.I give u 7/10

In The Lap Of The Sun

There are many kids (mean nine planets)
Tiny and huge
In the lap of the Sun
They have been living peacefully
Since centuries.....................
In the lap of the Sun
All are obedient, humble and modest
Lovely and charming
In the lap of the Sun

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