No rhymes, no frame of words but strong words.I give u 7/10
In the lap of the sun
There are many kids (mean nine planets) Tiny and huge In the lap of the Sun They have been living peacefully Since centuries..................... In the lap of the Sun All are obedient, humble and modest Lovely and charming In the lap of the Sun
I love your work, so moving..keep it up, your are being noticed by everyone....
All poem are great. The poet has a lot to say and he knows how to do it. Well done!
No rhymes, no frame of words but strong words.I give u 7/10