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  • Wahab Abdul (2/12/2014 10:35:00 PM)

    comment on poem '' An uncalled advice ''


    I like it.


    Tim Murray1 day ago
    I agree with you, to often (I must confess that I am guilty as well) we simply write one or two nice phrases and move on. This is wholly unfair, as the poet often puts in hours of concentrated time and effort and a part of their soul into the poem. In this poem, the message is clear, and concise. It lacks imagery or symbolism; but the lack of these elements do not take away from the poem. They reinforce the practical nature of the poem. The poem's infrastructure is symmetrical and balanced. The meter is fast and easy to read. A good poem.

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  • Wahab Abdul (2/12/2014 10:31:00 PM)

    comment on poem '' my universe my oyster''


    No one needs labels


    DanG1 day ago
    This poem touches on so many different topics.
    I feel that it could be about almost anything.
    Its very open and full of honesty.

  • Wahab Abdul (2/4/2014 2:15:00 AM)

    comment on ''Freedom''


    excellent

    Deepak Kumar Pattanayak14 hours ago
    Rightly said freedom with a cause is not freedom........it should be spontaneous and unconditional..
    very well composed.............
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    Huh


    Courtney Walden14 hours ago
    Wow, not what I was expecting. Interesting

  • Wahab Abdul (2/1/2014 6:18:00 AM)

    comment on poem '' children ''


    Beliefs being forced upon children without giving them other options is suffocating their minds.


    syykkogrl3 hours ago
    I think this is a great poem with a wonderful point.

  • Wahab Abdul (2/1/2014 6:15:00 AM)

    comment on poem ''children ''


    Powerful Message


    Tracy Bollinger3 hours ago
    You hit the nail on the head. How can they make the world a better place if they're forced to parrot our beliefs. We see where that got us.

  • Wahab Abdul (1/28/2014 5:51:00 AM)

    COMMENT ON POEM ''broom ''


    Jeff Cannon, - - - - Wow! the image in your hands peals away the coverings to reveal layered symbols, body metaphors take on a worldly live gripped by wayward culture and its madness, spoken with an elegance that tells its truth in ways hopefully to be heard and then deeply felt, so we know what we really need to sweep - thank u Abdul Wahab for this physical and poignant poem

  • Wahab Abdul (1/26/2014 1:55:00 PM)

    ON POEM '' LOVE OF SAND ''

    Girija Anavangot24 hours ago
    the supreme theme of love! the natural instinct in universe! the quench for union all arround in nature. sea and shore, wind and sand, night and day the unending phenomenons- well written.

  • Wahab Abdul (1/19/2014 1:11:00 PM)

    Comments on your poem ''Ya Ali''
    Commented on 1/19/2014 8: 15: 00 AM by Rex McCoy

    Some great mottos to keep in practice :) Enjoyed

  • Wahab Abdul (1/15/2014 1:01:00 AM)

    Comments on your poem'' Broom''
    Commented on 1/14/2014 6: 51: 00 PM by Andrea Dietrich

    very cool idea writing as if you are a broom. I really like this

  • Wahab Abdul (1/11/2014 11:27:00 PM)

    Comments on your poem'' Blooming Love''
    Commented on 1/11/2014 4: 10: 00 PM by Funom Makama

    Beautiful.. Well written. Keep on writing and well done for being among the top 100 most active poets.

>>Adolescence

A lot of praise and admiration I got when I was full of innocence
Now, I am under crook clumsy seductive adolescence.
Keeping head straight, running life difficult a lot
Sensing the senses makes me a bewildered pot.
Unknown pricks me, the soul is heavy and restless
The world appearing suffocated ruthless.
Sentiment creeps in, around hard blowing the wind.
I do not know how to cool and keep quite my mind.

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