Filled very much with intrigue and then comical. I liked it. You are a strange fellow in a good way. I enjoy people who are different from the normal everyday sorts. good poem sadness and laughter Michele
The bard in you is travelling from love, despair and disappointment, spirituality and death yet resolves to live and die as a poet. Don't get vexed. Your exploration into the realm of mysticism has just started.
Take some care on clarity and grammar and you will be blooming. Thanks.