abhimanyu kumar.s (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

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  • Emebet Mesfin (2/16/2012 9:16:00 AM)

    liked what I read so far. kind of identified myself with some of your poems. they sound so natural. write on, brother! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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  • John Cabrera (1/26/2012 4:18:00 PM)

    I like your poem.Very good use of imagery. I pictured everything you said. Good job.

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  • John Cabrera (1/26/2012 4:17:00 PM)

    I like the poem. Good use of imagery. I really pictured a soul.

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  • Allan Farran (1/15/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    Thankyou for the invit to read your poetry it was very good I like the simplicity. You take a look at my poems specially forest and whatever your will

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  • Michele Kostelnik Parrillo (1/11/2012 3:06:00 PM)

    Filled very much with intrigue and then comical. I liked it. You are a strange fellow in a good way. I enjoy people who are different from the normal everyday sorts. good poem sadness and laughter Michele

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  • Rajendran Muthiah (12/31/2011 10:15:00 PM)

    The bard in you is travelling from love, despair and disappointment, spirituality and death yet resolves to live and die as a poet. Don't get vexed. Your exploration into the realm of mysticism has just started.
    Take some care on clarity and grammar and you will be blooming. Thanks.

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  • Rajendran Muthiah (12/29/2011 8:02:00 AM)

    you are humorous as well as mystic. Some amount of brevity in expression will make you widely read. In an young age, you have talents to harp on the theme of death. Congrats!
    M.Rajendran, Chgennai-116

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  • Grace Pantaleo (12/16/2011 10:28:00 AM)

    wow at first i was shocked then later on i laughed, very interesting man!

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  • Joyce Dedios (12/16/2011 5:31:00 AM)

    haha its funny
    you thought that your dead hehe
    man!

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  • Ed Homer (12/9/2011 12:16:00 AM)

    I find your sleep poem quite comical and you seem to explain yourself as well read, I have read no one as what ever I write comes from inside I give no man or woman credit for my feelings, , They are mine alone...I think of you as a fine poet and see you to are prolific..I wrote 127 in 17 or so days.I have only been here since Nov.17.It never stops..I think as with you it will not either good luck to us all...Please do not take me as bragging I am open with my words and am not that way...

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ROAD TO END

I see the Third coming on the Road,
Finding no answer of Second on the Board.
Road is full of Lust and Dust in this Land,
Yes, yes I want to get out of this Wasteland.

Should I hide under the Chaucer's inn,
Or else inside the Forster's False cave.
Here, the things are aparted on the sand,
Its mere ruined Culture and Anarchy on the Land.

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