Adam McKim

Rookie - 222 Points (11/12/1984)

Comments about Adam McKim

  • Rookie Www. (9/3/2012 10:28:00 AM)

    In my assessment as one who teaches English language and literature and as one who occasionally asks my students to write poems and stories at times your poetry has a charm of its own with vibrant and well focussed thought patterns. Mr Adam McKim has a Frostian philosophy in its hidden shades and he is going to make it greater still I believe. All the best Mr Adam

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Lisa Struthers (8/3/2012 8:16:00 PM)

    I just have to say, I had to read all your poems once I read the first. They say things I've felt that I could never give the right words too. So thank's truly nice to know that it's not just me who feels as you do! ! ! Keep writing, you really have a way with words that convey so many different emotions.

  • Rookie - 31 Points Christine Blaydes (3/28/2012 12:41:00 AM)

    I love your poems, they are so cleaver and well said. Life changing. keep it up! =D

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alexianna Brandhagen (3/24/2012 4:56:00 PM)

    your poems are well-written, well-phrased, and well done overall. i seldom find poems with so much raw emotion, and i look forward to any more you submit. brava

Love Never Dies

Lying here on my bed,
Crying tears, for you have fled.
Leaving loose ends never tied,
But for me, love never dies.

You may think that love hurts,
But to me, love is no curse.
Some say they love and they lie,
But for me, love never dies.

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