Adam McKim

Rookie - 222 Points (11/12/1984)

Comments about Adam McKim

  • Rookie Www. (9/3/2012 10:28:00 AM)

    In my assessment as one who teaches English language and literature and as one who occasionally asks my students to write poems and stories at times your poetry has a charm of its own with vibrant and well focussed thought patterns. Mr Adam McKim has a Frostian philosophy in its hidden shades and he is going to make it greater still I believe. All the best Mr Adam

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Lisa Struthers (8/3/2012 8:16:00 PM)

    I just have to say, I had to read all your poems once I read the first. They say things I've felt that I could never give the right words too. So thank's truly nice to know that it's not just me who feels as you do! ! ! Keep writing, you really have a way with words that convey so many different emotions.

  • Rookie - 31 Points Christine Blaydes (3/28/2012 12:41:00 AM)

    I love your poems, they are so cleaver and well said. Life changing. keep it up! =D

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alexianna Brandhagen (3/24/2012 4:56:00 PM)

    your poems are well-written, well-phrased, and well done overall. i seldom find poems with so much raw emotion, and i look forward to any more you submit. brava

When You Wake

When you wake, think of me,
You're in my thoughts as well.
Put a smile upon your face,
For in your heart I dwell.

Lie there a moment, don't you move,
Don't even blink an eye.
Imagine I am there with you,
Your sweet and loving guy.

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