Dear Adam Zank,
You are 14 and I am 74. You are born on 13-7-1991 and I was born on 13-7-1931. What an exact difference of 60 years between you and myself.
Your attempt to bring out your inner thoughts thro' your tiny verses is really bold and appreciable. One day you will become one of the topmost poets of the world.
You should read more and more poems of others, both ancient classic poems and the modern poems as well. You will get better ideas to present your thoughts sweetly and nicely. I pray Jesus to give you more strength and knowledge to fulfil all your desires in this field. You go thro' my poems in this website, where I have written more for children of your age to know about the East, particularly about our Indian thoughts and culture, which you may be interested to know. Wishing you all the best,
I just want to say Adam...I am inspired by your wonderous voice...your writing projects a richness that is rare for someone still so tender in his years...Don't change your style...aways speak in a voice uniquely your own.