Aditya Mudbhary

Rookie - 85 Points (December 16 - Still living / Patan, Nepal)

Comments about Aditya Mudbhary

  • Fabrizio Frosini Fabrizio Frosini (1/18/2016 7:32:00 AM)

    a young, bright poet whose poetry is filled with a beautiful imagery and enticing messages, but also with pain, sorrow and hope..
    I enjoyed reading your poems, Aditya. Keep on posting!
    Peace

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  • Pratikshya Sedhain (8/20/2013 5:34:00 AM)

    very good poems. I liked all. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.

  • Anonymous Butterfly (2/26/2010 9:26:00 AM)

    Hi,
    I've read all your poems and you have the gift of writing and you show your emotions. That's the reason why most of people write to express themselves or they use it as their PersonalDiary. (I do.) Sometimes.
    I liked The World Empire most.
    Keep penning.


    B.B.

  • Terence Nabbs (10/7/2009 12:21:00 PM)

    dear eddie I've read all your work and I am surprised by the use of feeling you put into your poetry for such a young age, looking foreward to more terry

To Love Or Not

The breeze of memories blow through my heavy chest,
A cool long breath of the future slithers into my veins,
It was not so long ago since I saw the lady from the west,
And all too soon uncertainty drips on my shirt and stains.

A cruel joke played over and over again,
Like a modern mixtape with scratches they call so great,
Much like the waters of Everest eventually end in the drain,
It seems all good things have a similar fate.

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