Aditya Mudbhary

Rookie - 10 Points (December 16 - Still living / Patan, Nepal)

Comments about Aditya Mudbhary

  • Rookie - 9 Points Pratikxa Sedhain (8/20/2013 5:34:00 AM)

    very good poems. I liked all. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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  • Rookie Anonymous Butterfly (2/26/2010 9:26:00 AM)

    Hi,
    I've read all your poems and you have the gift of writing and you show your emotions. That's the reason why most of people write to express themselves or they use it as their PersonalDiary. (I do.) Sometimes.
    I liked The World Empire most.
    Keep penning.


    B.B.

  • Rookie Terence Nabbs (10/7/2009 12:21:00 PM)

    dear eddie I've read all your work and I am surprised by the use of feeling you put into your poetry for such a young age, looking foreward to more terry

Into Paradise

Strange hours calling my mighty soul,
Into the lair of death,
Showing me the path of light,
Towards death is my sight.

Death is beautiful if thy know the secret behind the wall of life,
A hallucination has shown me so now I want to break on through to the other side,
A life of misery that’s what we all have before the journey of the soul,
Love, Passion, and history in the making is a trouble we go through thinking it’s the perfect goal.

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