Aditya Mudbhary

Rookie - 10 Points (December 16 - Still living / Patan, Nepal)

Comments about Aditya Mudbhary

  • Rookie - 163 Points Pratikxa Sedhain (8/20/2013 5:34:00 AM)

    very good poems. I liked all. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Anonymous Butterfly (2/26/2010 9:26:00 AM)

    I've read all your poems and you have the gift of writing and you show your emotions. That's the reason why most of people write to express themselves or they use it as their PersonalDiary. (I do.) Sometimes.
    I liked The World Empire most.
    Keep penning.


  • Rookie Terence Nabbs (10/7/2009 12:21:00 PM)

    dear eddie I've read all your work and I am surprised by the use of feeling you put into your poetry for such a young age, looking foreward to more terry

Sweet Misery

In a dream of the deepest thoughts of mine,
I could see a lady under the eyes of the stars,
Looking into my eyes as we dine'
In the finest of all love hours.

Her eyes shine like well polished hazel,
And her hair the tone of caramel brown,
The fairness of her beauty made her like a man made angel,
And therefore she wears my precious love crown.

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