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Aftab Alam

[Khursheed] (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/13/2014 10:37:00 PM)

    When language cross one another there is a possible problem As take Mahatma Buddh and Buddha all the words from Hindi to English has a problem if you say Buddha then you don't have to pronounce a, , abruptly stoppage as Buddh(a) and pronunciation with A' but it has been accepted like we write Mishra- in fact it is Mishr(a) and A is not pronounced but we have accepted ...so yes thank for correcting the mistake d was missed, I like to be corrected expecting from all .....this is the place we can do this thank you all

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  • Stan Petrovich (9/13/2014 4:43:00 PM)

    How can you possibly misspell Buddha?

  • Stan Petrovich (9/13/2014 4:42:00 PM)

    How on earth does on misspell Buddha? I though it was impossible...

  • Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/8/2014 6:57:00 AM)

    sounds really great. you are showing your emotions nice. you will have great future in poetry. i invite you to read my poems. as a friendly look.

  • Satish Kumar Nayak (3/24/2014 9:12:00 AM)

    A great poet with a vast knowledge and a broad outlook... Sir always felt happy to read your writings..... Thank You sir...

  • Geetha Jayakumar (12/30/2013 12:50:00 PM)

    Poet Aftab Alam
    One of the talented and gifted poet.
    His many poems on nature, current topics, society issues, pain, love and many more are his wonderful collection.
    His poems on both English and Hindi are wonderful to read.
    Its really an amazing gift you are blessed with
    Thank you for supporting me in this journey of poems.
    May you keep on contributing valuable poems to the poetic world.
    Wishing you all the best!
    God Bless!

    Thank you.

  • Ved Prakash (11/8/2013 10:31:00 AM)

    thank you sir that a famous poet like you commented on my poem

  • Pardaz Aftab (11/4/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    i see in him a bright future in poetry

  • Deepak Malhotra (9/28/2013 1:17:00 AM)

    Thank you very much sir

  • Ghayas Sayyed (9/17/2013 9:20:00 AM)

    Have mercy Sir alwyz on You, , , , thnxx alot for giving time on my poem...actually my subject in poetry is directly belongs to sprituality, , , , I'll surely enjoys the cmpny of yoz here n in ths ma plzr...too

Labyrinth of life

River that flows ‘tween the two opposite ends
Dancing, singing, jumping Keeping ends apart,
Ends broke the abyss, amid the wave, left no ends,
Coincidentally, no ends and no river, all depart.
O River! The wave, " ye the curiosity of the ends".

Gigantism, the heaviness of thought dies into the salt,
Free from worries, all rose up to heaven and hanged,
Then slowly moved with roar and thunder that banged,

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