Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 16,785 Points [BitterTruth] (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,592 Points Savita Tyagi (10/16/2014 8:41:00 AM)

    Amazingly beautiful poems. Simplicity and love of life reflected in his poems is warmth of his own personality. We are blessed to be able to read his poetry. My best wishes always for him and his poetry.

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  • Rookie - 94 Points Zahra Abbas (9/12/2014 1:56:00 PM)

    wonderful poems.....for all times.. :)

  • Rookie - 123 Points Asma Hashmi (8/11/2014 8:32:00 AM)

    A poet for all time and for all generation

  • Rookie - 149 Points Bisma Mirza (8/10/2014 5:50:00 AM)

    Akhtar Jawad is a versatile genius, he mever lacks a topic.

  • Bronze Star - 5,319 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/24/2014 10:28:00 AM)

    Chand Shabdh Kavi Jawad Aktharji Kay Naam!
    (Inspired by his poem BABUL KI DUA)

    Duaein babul ki badi hi anmol hoti hain
    Kaanton mein bhi phool Khila dethi hain
    Aasmaanon ko bhi hila dethi hai.
    Amber aur dharathi ko ek kar dethi hain.

    Jab ek beti ko eaisey hi ek babul ki duaein Saath ho toh
    Suraj ki nayi roshni, andhere mein bhi dikhayi dethi hai
    Ek nayi disha dikhayee dethi hain un kaantein bhare raasthon mein!

    Dua hai meri ki Aapki lambi umra ho
    Her betiyon ko Aapki duaein prapth ho!

    Shukriya Kehna Toh ek chhota shabdh hoga
    Jo Aapki duaein Kay saamney
    Uska koi mol nahin.

    Nazar na lagey mere babul ko
    Hazaron roshniya Chand ki
    Aap per barsarthi rahe
    Duae barkarar rakhthi rahey Aap per.
    Mein Aapki lambi umra ki kamnayein kart hi hoon!

    Few lines for Poet Jawad Akhtarji (translation)
    (Inspired by his poem BABUL KI DUA!)

    A heartfelt blessings from father is priceless for a daughter.
    Prayer can bloom flower even In midst of thorns too
    It can vibrate the very sky too
    It can merge sky and earth together.
    If every daughter is blessed with heartfelt prayers
    Even in the midst of darkness new hope of sun will rise
    New path is seen even in the midst of thorns

    I whole heartedly pray for your long and healthier life.
    And pray each daughters get your pious blessings.

    To tell, thank you, will be a small token of respect
    Which is worthless in front of your priceless blessings.

    Never evil eye forecasts it's shadow on you dear father
    Thousands of moon's lights
    Keep on showering you with blessings
    May God Bless you with long and healthy life!

    I respect Poet Jawad Akhtarji whole heartedly. I respect his vast knowledge whether be in his poems, ghazals, or shyaari, whether in Hindi or Urdu. I respect his each comments with my whole heart. Many of his inspiring comments did motivate me to come up with many poems. Thank you Akhtarji for supporting me in this journey of poems. Your poem Babul ki Dua inspired me to come up with this poem, which I wrote instantly.
    Thanks a lot. God Bless!

  • Rookie Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:21:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

  • Rookie - 14 Points Farhan Mirza (5/29/2014 12:23:00 AM)

    I love the simplicity of him writing and the messages.

  • Rookie - 59 Points Piumi Wijenayake (5/28/2014 1:22:00 PM)

    cute writing and it all about feelings of girls

  • Rookie - 14 Points Farhan Mirza (5/22/2014 2:03:00 AM)

    Your poems are lovely and amazing.

  • Rookie - 14 Points Farhan Mirza (5/22/2014 1:56:00 AM)

    Akhtar Jawad an amazing poet, I think Jawad complete writing a book soon. Please don't stop poetry. I loved your poem.

Double Standards

I saw her photograph at home,
Liked her simple grace.
Saw her at a holy place,
Peace prevailing face.

I saw her on a modern town's roam,
Modern dressing modern style,
Posing for cameras and mobile,
A glorious past becoming futile.

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