Alessandra Liverani

Rookie (Wollongong, Australia)

Comments about Alessandra Liverani

  • Veteran Poet - 1,329 Points Jerry Hughes (7/15/2009 9:33:00 PM)

    Seems you have fetish about smoking and smokers but remember this, 'smoking is a dying habit'. Cheers, Jerry

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Emancipation Planz (1/21/2008 12:46:00 AM)

    This baby burns! ! ! ! Truly dedicated to a mission full of huff and puffery! ... Top marks for a campaign to Kick some butts! ! ! Being here is a one-stop-shop for this ex-smoker to breath and exhale some healthy deliberations! !

  • Rookie Mary Nagy (2/6/2006 9:01:00 PM)

    I think it's amazing that you weren't even addicted to smoking yourself! To think you have written these poems simply to help others..........that is really wonderful and not too many people are so thoughtful. Honestly, that is so nice! sincerely, Mary

  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich1 (2/1/2005 7:37:00 AM)

    Well, did you stop smoking?
    When did you start writing?
    H

Which Voice?

In English, we have a choice
Between the active and passive voice
'I am in control' is on the go
'I am not being controlled' is rather slow

A person who is not addicted
Would see themselves clearly depicted
As not being controlled, the passive voice
That’s how they’d see it, if they had the choice

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