Very nice poem, I liked it because it's a sweet message you are trying to send out to someone. Maybe this person doesn't always think positive. So your telling them to keep their head up and look on the brightside. To me there always is a brightside, No matter how you look at things or what the situation is.
Why cant she be like them Planning a day at the plaza Sit and chat, have a coffee Wander through the stores.
Because going into the shops Causes her to freeze, Tears well up in her eyes She becomes dizzy and disorientated.