Your peoms are really intense. All of them have a universal theme and are in some way connected. Perhaps I could counter your peoms with something more optimistic. I'll post some soon. I like your style of writing, the langueage is plain, but still effective.
Shivers running down my back And tears filling my eyes Once again I am alone When I let down my disguise
I’m hearing noises in my head Voices of confusion And once again turning to self harm Seems to be my only solution