Your peoms are really intense. All of them have a universal theme and are in some way connected. Perhaps I could counter your peoms with something more optimistic. I'll post some soon. I like your style of writing, the langueage is plain, but still effective.
The only way
Falling onto the bathroom floor With tears filling my eyes I’ve turned the music up So no one hears my cries
I open up the cupboard door And take out a single blade So many past experiences In my head are not replayed