Your peoms are really intense. All of them have a universal theme and are in some way connected. Perhaps I could counter your peoms with something more optimistic. I'll post some soon. I like your style of writing, the langueage is plain, but still effective.
I seem to have this fascination That creates such aggravation That no one understands An explanation it demands
I’m finding joy in pain Self destruction does reign Scars hidden beneath the surface Undressing makes me nervous