Your peoms are really intense. All of them have a universal theme and are in some way connected. Perhaps I could counter your peoms with something more optimistic. I'll post some soon. I like your style of writing, the langueage is plain, but still effective.
For my Father-Would you?
If you really knew me Would you really care Would you understand I’m hurting Because you’re never there
Would you be ashamed of me For drugs I have turned to Would you cast me away Because I lied to you