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Comments about Amit Ray
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Unwritten Soul
(10/2/2011 8:57:00 AM)
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The ray he spots on object make anything very detailed and clear. Just pick anything, Amit will easily describe them all with the best chosen words. Intelligent is undeniable and inseparable in Amit's works, proving that the ray really coming from Amit's mind. The universal issue, really transparent in many of this peace lover writing products. I always saying he maybe an IT engineer but need to remember Amit is the great writer with the luminescence mind..Glowing and spark to light.I pay my respect for the courageousness, humanity, expanding love definition. I amazed how Amit managed to critic other poets' work with his limited/busy time with that bright comments. Amit Ray really got striking ray. Keep inspiring us Amit! ! _Unwritten Soul
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Ahmed Khaled
(10/1/2011 10:43:00 AM)
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fly amit
fly friend
you have the wings
of poetry
and you have the hands
of friendship
so.........................
i love you amit
i love you my friend.....................
phd++++a++++k++++
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Lenore Lee
(9/22/2011 7:54:00 PM)
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Your poetry is so descriptive and sooo amazing. Thanks for being so inspiring to poets everywhere!
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Ahmed Khaled
(9/1/2011 2:19:00 PM)
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what a sublime beauty which could grasp us and what a profound feeling which we could grasp when we go deep into your poetry, o dove of love, thanks alot /\ yours: ph.d: a.khaled
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Aamit Rothschild
(8/20/2011 9:16:00 AM)
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From: Asiimwe Simon (Uganda ;)
To: Aamit Rothschild
Date Time: 8/18/2011 4: 48: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: i liked your poem
YOU HAVE WHAT IT TAKES TO BE A POET LAURETTE OF THE UNITED STATES OF AMERICA.
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Aamit Rothschild
(8/20/2011 9:06:00 AM)
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From: Heather Wilkins (cincinnati United States; Female; 54)
To: Aamit Rothschild
Date Time: 8/18/2011 10: 07: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: poem
I have read several of your poems, and enjoyed reading each. You are very talented writer. Study haiku's a little bit more. write one in english and then translate it to german. okay... good luck... heather
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Aamit Rothschild
(8/20/2011 8:59:00 AM)
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From: Diana Kauke (: P Latvia; Female; 14)
To: Aamit Rothschild
Date Time: 8/19/2011 2: 16: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: Re: KOISHII-
Hey, nice to meet you! ^^ I really like your poems! ^^
Best wishes,
Diana
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Aamit Rothschild
(8/12/2011 8:53:00 AM)
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From: Colin J... (Dalgety Bay, Fife, Scotland United Kingdom; Male; 62)
To: Aamit Rothschild
Date Time: 8/12/2011 8: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: An Apple
Cannot beleive that the person who wrot 'An apple' wrote this request...
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Aamit Rothschild
(8/8/2011 6:19:00 AM)
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From: Luke Easter (Cleveland, Ohio United States; Male; 61)
To: Aamit Rothschild
Date Time: 8/7/2011 9: 09: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: Re: An Apple
11 R Principle to write a poem.
1) Read-) not just the written word but your surroundings via five senses.
2) Retain-) write them down whether interesting or not.
3) Restructure-) now throw out that which does not send a message you want to convey. Putting thoughts in an order that tell a poetic story.
4) Rhyme-) here's the tricky part. Sometimes a sentence will become fragmented but that's OK when writing rhyme poetry. Have your dictionary and thesaurus ready.
5) Relate-) in a written form. Poetry!
6) Resistance-) will come from Satan as his fiery darts try to divert your attention from the task at hand to all your failures and misdeeds of the past
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7) Release-) the spirit by standing tall in your thought process being firm in a conviction for whatever you're writing.
8) Rushing-) is the last thing you'll want to do.
9) Relax-) take your time. What's the hurry?
10) Read-) once satisfied with the work, have another look at it. See if the message you want to get across is what they feel as well.
11) Remember-) in Christ Jesus, God sent His best. So why go back to Him with anything less?
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Aamit Rothschild
(8/8/2011 6:16:00 AM)
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From: R. G. Bell (Myrtle Beach United States; Male; 59)
To: Aamit Rothschild
Date Time: 8/7/2011 2: 03: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: Re: An Apple
I suggest you work on your spelling.
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****LONDON****
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Black din and brown bustle
Amid the white whistle,
Tissle-tassle, hissle-hassle,
And Germans hated with German queen on the palanquin of this aisle;
Singers beg and beggars sing,
In the illuminant Tottenham x-ing,
Elite pubs with plastic balls in receptacle,
Colosseums oracle, baskers-betters-bookers-hookers vying a miracle,
Skimpily clads springle as their bangles jingle,
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