i m writing poem since my teenage. most of them r destroyed saying it has no substantial use for common people in 2011 i aptly posted my few poems in this site.just next day i got comments from three persons praising my poem among them is Amit RAY. this inspired me much and today i have posted abt 500 poems. now a days poetry has become the part of my life. i dont know if Amit has stopped writing poem. if so i requst him to start again. i wish him as a bright poet and author
You address or just apostrophise i don't know, but you dramatise emotions well.most of your poems are dramas enacted inside and here I know words are futile like a car without oil...you know your strength in language very well.the lexia accords the subject, see the camel, Behest and Kashmir..Flirt -a common subject with an uncommon handling...here reality is the looking glass and desire is to seize the moments...Nature n effort conferred on you the divine gift of languages, n you try to make the most of it.
Nader Baheri (TEHRAN Iran; Male; 26)
9/28/2012 5: 34: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
hello dear friend.
I always learn something from your poems.
I will always be a reader of yours.
And now my opinion about BEHEST(nice topic u chosen)
undoubtedly this is one of the best poems i've read.
full of puns and play on words.especially the part with Lawrence Arabia.
The best way you have joined the french troubadour with Shamanism.and also the combination between Shamanism and sand and sandalwood.
the combination between sands and sun gives me the feeling of drifting boat in the middle of the see hopelessly.
Any way i really enjoyed it although it is a little bit incomprehensible.
mercy bocu for sharing