Amit Ray (Chelsea, London, United Kingdom)
***STRANGER STRANGER***
Stranger, Stranger look around everywhere
Stranger, Stranger will anchor nowhere
Stranger, Stranger no peace in eyes
Stranger, Stranger cocktail virtues and vies.
Revamp, rejuvenate, regard, retail all trues or lies.
Stranger Stranger, ambush the danger
Stranger Stranger, no one to harbinger,
Stranger Stranger- a tantaliser;
From: Francis Duggan (Australia ;)
To: Amit Ray
Date Time: 6/16/2009 8: 06: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
Subject: Re: One cup of coffee-Amit Ray's new poem page-2 number 21
Hello Ray
This is an excellent poem up to your usual high standard, your passion and originality shines through here and it is up to your usual high standard, surely a another 10 poem to add to your many great poems, good on you Ray.
F Duggan
you are nearing your end
create a million new names
a million new ids
but the killer blow
is about to hit you
thy vicious cycle
u started
will gulp you in
you oversmart bufoon
thy days are counted........
dat is a great poems..
keep it up.. let me know wen u add some more poems on here so i can check it out.. also check my poems out wen u get chance.. thanks