Amit Ray

Rookie - 133 Points (United Kingdom)

Comments about Amit Ray

  • Rookie Ahmed Khaled (10/1/2011 10:43:00 AM)

    fly amit
    fly friend
    you have the wings
    of poetry
    and you have the hands
    of friendship
    so.........................
    i love you amit
    i love you my friend.....................
    phd++++a++++k++++

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  • Rookie Lenore Lee (9/22/2011 7:54:00 PM)

    Your poetry is so descriptive and sooo amazing. Thanks for being so inspiring to poets everywhere!

  • Rookie Ahmed Khaled (9/1/2011 2:19:00 PM)

    what a sublime beauty which could grasp us and what a profound feeling which we could grasp when we go deep into your poetry, o dove of love, thanks alot /\ yours: ph.d: a.khaled

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/20/2011 9:16:00 AM)

    From: Asiimwe Simon (Uganda ;)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/18/2011 4: 48: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: i liked your poem


    YOU HAVE WHAT IT TAKES TO BE A POET LAURETTE OF THE UNITED STATES OF AMERICA.

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/20/2011 9:06:00 AM)

    From: Heather Wilkins (cincinnati United States; Female; 54)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/18/2011 10: 07: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: poem


    I have read several of your poems, and enjoyed reading each. You are very talented writer. Study haiku's a little bit more. write one in english and then translate it to german. okay... good luck... heather

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/20/2011 8:59:00 AM)

    From: Diana Kauke (: P Latvia; Female; 14)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/19/2011 2: 16: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Re: KOISHII-


    Hey, nice to meet you! ^^ I really like your poems! ^^

    Best wishes,
    Diana

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/12/2011 8:53:00 AM)

    From: Colin J... (Dalgety Bay, Fife, Scotland United Kingdom; Male; 62)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/12/2011 8: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: An Apple


    Cannot beleive that the person who wrot 'An apple' wrote this request...

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/8/2011 6:19:00 AM)

    From: Luke Easter (Cleveland, Ohio United States; Male; 61)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/7/2011 9: 09: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Re: An Apple


    11 R Principle to write a poem.

    1) Read-) not just the written word but your surroundings via five senses.

    2) Retain-) write them down whether interesting or not.

    3) Restructure-) now throw out that which does not send a message you want to convey. Putting thoughts in an order that tell a poetic story.

    4) Rhyme-) here's the tricky part. Sometimes a sentence will become fragmented but that's OK when writing rhyme poetry. Have your dictionary and thesaurus ready.

    5) Relate-) in a written form. Poetry!

    6) Resistance-) will come from Satan as his fiery darts try to divert your attention from the task at hand to all your failures and misdeeds of the past
    .
    7) Release-) the spirit by standing tall in your thought process being firm in a conviction for whatever you're writing.

    8) Rushing-) is the last thing you'll want to do.

    9) Relax-) take your time. What's the hurry?

    10) Read-) once satisfied with the work, have another look at it. See if the message you want to get across is what they feel as well.

    11) Remember-) in Christ Jesus, God sent His best. So why go back to Him with anything less?

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/8/2011 6:16:00 AM)

    From: R. G. Bell (Myrtle Beach United States; Male; 59)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/7/2011 2: 03: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Re: An Apple


    I suggest you work on your spelling.

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/5/2011 3:06:00 PM)

    From: Surabhi Gupta (Barddhaman India; Female; 15)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/5/2011 9: 40: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: comments


    which languages do u dont no? ? ? ?

Best Poem of Amit Ray

****~in Sunderbans~****

Your Name: Amit Ray

Title of Poem: In Sunderbans

The Body of the Poem:

In Sunderbans where tigers roar
Mangroves dense vast surroundings explore
Black stripes sniffed on orange flesh
for succour where to- ever his grouses justified refesh
Danger lurks cautiously guarding his lair, mother Nature in furore!

A timid deer`s gossamer dreams in his patient mouth
That`s how the law defined-somebody`s sunrise and somebody else`s sunset so couth
A second day fuel with a succulent buffalo, a third day duel with a crocodile in nesh
In ...

Read the full of ****~in Sunderbans~****

****~in Sunderbans~****

Your Name: Amit Ray

Title of Poem: In Sunderbans

The Body of the Poem:

In Sunderbans where tigers roar
Mangroves dense vast surroundings explore
Black stripes sniffed on orange flesh

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