Amit Ray

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Comments about Amit Ray

  • Ahmed Khaled (10/1/2011 10:43:00 AM)

    fly amit
    fly friend
    you have the wings
    of poetry
    and you have the hands
    of friendship
    i love you amit
    i love you my friend.....................

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  • Lenore Lee (9/22/2011 7:54:00 PM)

    Your poetry is so descriptive and sooo amazing. Thanks for being so inspiring to poets everywhere!

  • Ahmed Khaled (9/1/2011 2:19:00 PM)

    what a sublime beauty which could grasp us and what a profound feeling which we could grasp when we go deep into your poetry, o dove of love, thanks alot /\ yours: ph.d: a.khaled

  • Allemagne Roßmann Allemagne Roßmann (8/20/2011 9:16:00 AM)

    From: Asiimwe Simon (Uganda ;)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/18/2011 4: 48: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: i liked your poem


  • Allemagne Roßmann Allemagne Roßmann (8/20/2011 9:06:00 AM)

    From: Heather Wilkins (cincinnati United States; Female; 54)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/18/2011 10: 07: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: poem

    I have read several of your poems, and enjoyed reading each. You are very talented writer. Study haiku's a little bit more. write one in english and then translate it to german. okay... good luck... heather

  • Allemagne Roßmann Allemagne Roßmann (8/20/2011 8:59:00 AM)

    From: Diana Kauke (: P Latvia; Female; 14)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/19/2011 2: 16: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: Re: KOISHII-

    Hey, nice to meet you! ^^ I really like your poems! ^^

    Best wishes,

  • Allemagne Roßmann Allemagne Roßmann (8/12/2011 8:53:00 AM)

    From: Colin J... (Dalgety Bay, Fife, Scotland United Kingdom; Male; 62)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/12/2011 8: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: An Apple

    Cannot beleive that the person who wrot 'An apple' wrote this request...

  • Allemagne Roßmann Allemagne Roßmann (8/8/2011 6:19:00 AM)

    From: Luke Easter (Cleveland, Ohio United States; Male; 61)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/7/2011 9: 09: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: Re: An Apple

    11 R Principle to write a poem.

    1) Read-) not just the written word but your surroundings via five senses.

    2) Retain-) write them down whether interesting or not.

    3) Restructure-) now throw out that which does not send a message you want to convey. Putting thoughts in an order that tell a poetic story.

    4) Rhyme-) here's the tricky part. Sometimes a sentence will become fragmented but that's OK when writing rhyme poetry. Have your dictionary and thesaurus ready.

    5) Relate-) in a written form. Poetry!

    6) Resistance-) will come from Satan as his fiery darts try to divert your attention from the task at hand to all your failures and misdeeds of the past
    7) Release-) the spirit by standing tall in your thought process being firm in a conviction for whatever you're writing.

    8) Rushing-) is the last thing you'll want to do.

    9) Relax-) take your time. What's the hurry?

    10) Read-) once satisfied with the work, have another look at it. See if the message you want to get across is what they feel as well.

    11) Remember-) in Christ Jesus, God sent His best. So why go back to Him with anything less?

  • Allemagne Roßmann Allemagne Roßmann (8/8/2011 6:16:00 AM)

    From: R. G. Bell (Myrtle Beach United States; Male; 59)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/7/2011 2: 03: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: Re: An Apple

    I suggest you work on your spelling.

  • Allemagne Roßmann Allemagne Roßmann (8/5/2011 3:06:00 PM)

    From: Surabhi Gupta (Barddhaman India; Female; 15)
    To: Aamit Rothschild
    Date Time: 8/5/2011 9: 40: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject: comments

    which languages do u dont no? ? ? ?

Best Poem of Amit Ray

****~arranged Marriage~****

And they came all blueberry cranberry blackberry cherry
and I remained dumbfounded whom to pop and whom to marry
worry and merry like tom and jerry
in a flurry to life`s golden galarie
and I went on choosing a perfect french for my calvary
Britanny my red carpet strawberry

Left mrs discreet and right miss discrete in ferry
my rubber is perplexed where to serry
Then an old pal Sherry called on from Banbury
telling she knows a single mom gooseberry to take my Cadbury
But women made always my life ghetto like
the syllables of sonnetina rispetto telling tales...

Read the full of ****~arranged Marriage~****

****~in Sunderbans~****

Your Name: Amit Ray

Title of Poem: In Sunderbans

The Body of the Poem:

In Sunderbans where tigers roar
Mangroves dense vast surroundings explore
Black stripes sniffed on orange flesh

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