Anna, I see you write about things you are interested about, that is fine, and is a good way to begin, but for me, i find meaning and inspiration in many of the poems, i read. If i were to write about the godfather a movie, that i like or take interest in, i would not fully commit to the poem. A poem must have a mixture of words and emotions. I can see and read the words, the words in which you use to tell me a story are good, but the emotion is lacking. I can't taste the emotion, i don't feel the emotion, it is as if your poems are sterile, with no emotions. Don't worry, you will do fine, as long as you can get that concept down, I hope you take my advice, till then, i hope to see your next work.
Look without fear, I know what you feel; This pressure is building up inside, Bloody tears in saddened eyes. It twists your stomach, It turns you world around.