Your comment on my poem ('Twas Not A Rose) was 'The doubt in the first verse gradually lifts and there is conviction in the last four lines that is very finely expressed. There is alternate rhyming in the first verse, then couplet rhyming in the second, the third verse has classic verse rhyming and the last verse passes off well though the rhyming scheme is odd. Very cleverly done! There is a hard thought that is softened by the sweetness of the words chosen and there is softness too that is hardened by the sharpness of the pen that is clever too. Good luck and god bless, regards, aryaindia.'
I'm still recovering from this delicious onslaught! ! !
Your inputs are very much appreciated. Onward ho!
Cheers & God bless.
Vulgarity of expression For which, I dont throw blame On you, that thoughts like these Should cease, to burn your inner flame
Spiritually elevated, arya, whose soul soars Towards the ethereal mystery of knowing the self