aryaindia india

Rookie (24.10.1960 / Bangalore)

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  • Rookie - 5 Points Subroto Chatterjee (4/16/2009 7:05:00 AM)

    Your comment on my poem ('Twas Not A Rose) was 'The doubt in the first verse gradually lifts and there is conviction in the last four lines that is very finely expressed. There is alternate rhyming in the first verse, then couplet rhyming in the second, the third verse has classic verse rhyming and the last verse passes off well though the rhyming scheme is odd. Very cleverly done! There is a hard thought that is softened by the sweetness of the words chosen and there is softness too that is hardened by the sharpness of the pen that is clever too. Good luck and god bless, regards, aryaindia.'

    I'm still recovering from this delicious onslaught! ! !
    Your inputs are very much appreciated. Onward ho!
    Cheers & God bless.

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Joy And Peace

There's peace and joy in knowing
That love and truth so reign
That joy and peace in sowing
Momentum will just gain
If we could all just mend our hearts
Our minds and souls shall follow
In reaping sown harvested joys
Great hearts are far from hollow

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