Asif Andalib

Rookie (27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

Comments about Asif Andalib

  • Rookie - 11 Points Sahir Nawaz (7/20/2014 3:02:00 PM)

    janb apne apko shair manty hain to ahen ap urdu adab main english main kiya rekha hai na qafia na radeef na wazan o behar shairi karni hai aur urdu me krunga k pata chale wazan ka

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  • Rookie Harshal Joshi (2/25/2013 11:17:00 AM)

    i think you are a real genius at poems and most importantly rhymes keep it up my friend

  • Rookie Derek J. Brandt (12/14/2012 11:49:00 PM)

    Great work, Asif. You have alot of work to read, and I'm afraid I could never sift through it all. But I will remember you and return as new work is published.

  • Rookie Fatema Alidina (12/5/2012 11:07:00 AM)

    Hi, I really liked all the rhymes within the poem, keep it up, wonderful poem.

  • Rookie Lareine Sede (11/26/2012 11:17:00 AM)

    i like moonlit really enjoy it

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jacquelyn Burge (11/26/2012 10:44:00 AM)

    Your Poem Wild Romance is genius. I can feel the passion in the words. Great

  • Rookie Mamokete Lady M Modise (11/26/2012 5:37:00 AM)

    i think it gets straigth to the point an it about love keep on writting dear make us all proud

  • Rookie Olalekan Ajayi (11/23/2012 10:52:00 AM)

    I like the poem Love is precious than Money It's simple and the lines are measured in 7 beats. Well done. Keep writing.

  • Rookie Albert Andrews (11/19/2012 9:03:00 AM)

    Great piece of work my fellow poet. The words flow well, and will capture the attention of every reader.

  • Rookie - 192 Points Angel Lockwood (11/4/2012 5:14:00 PM)

    Just simply sweet! ! ! !

Best Poem of Asif Andalib

On This Day Of Spring Original By Rabindranath Tagore

So many flowers bloom
On this day of Spring
So many flutes are played
So many birds sing
On this day of Spring
On this day of Spring

My friend's heart is as soft
As a little flower
Whose negligence makes it
So terribly suffer
Why do you come to her
And try to make her laugh
The one who used to come
Now doesn't care enough

So many flowers bloom
On this day of Spring
So many flutes are played
So many birds sing
On this day of Spring
On this day of Spring

God please keep the happy
People always happy
And let the ...

Read the full of On This Day Of Spring Original By Rabindranath Tagore

God And Prophet Muhammad

Alas! There’s no one better than God
And He is cruel somewhat
God feels lonely
Although He has so many friends
Because
God is one of a kind
Even angels are not like God
Angels have wings
But God’s body has no wing

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