I see a talent here, although I didn't read one poem that I felt was really finished. I hope you are reading poetry- maybe some publications like American Poetry Review and Poetry. Keep writing...I'm sincere about believing in your talent.
I believe that there are worlds where we touch, where we grew up together playing in fields, and the best, where you love me. I believe it's in my dreams that these worlds poke through the skin of this lonely world,