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Beach Girl

[Beach Girl]

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  • John Westlake (2/26/2014 6:25:00 PM)

    Woah! ! I must say that i really enjoyed that one. Caused more than a small smile of my face and the lady sitting next to me

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  • John Westlake (2/26/2014 6:21:00 PM)

    Short but sweet and possibly true in a way. This is the first of yours that i have read. If the others are as good as this, i for one will enjoy reading them

  • Nika Mcguin (2/24/2014 4:02:00 PM)

    The mermaid poetess herself, there's nobody who writes better about, or loves more, the beach. Still, she is more than seashore poems, she has a talent not easily matched for spinning poetic verse into silk!

    ~Nika

  • Goldheart Bird (9/25/2013 4:05:00 PM)

    Ms.Beach Girl,
    You are one of the best friends i have in PH. I always send to tons of messages, (I guess sometime i'm annoying) But you always reply with a warm message back! And I love all your poems!
    P.S Please check weekly on my poems! I normal would have 2 new poems every week!

Crazy

I don’t know, I don’t know
Maybe I’m crazy
I could feel, I could taste
Salty sea spray
When I awoke, I could hear
And see the blue

I heard the gulls, cry overhead
The sky was hazy
Like drums my heart, beat in my chest
I felt afraid
Was this a dream, or just me
My mind askew?

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