bri mar

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  • Gold Star - 6,474 Points Paul Sebastian (3/23/2014 11:20:00 PM)

    You write very well. So much you can do to make this world a better place!

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  • Gold Star - 6,474 Points Paul Sebastian (3/23/2014 11:18:00 PM)

    Superbly written! ! Very inspiring for someone who is trying to understand the meaning of one's existence. Thanks.

  • Gold Star - 6,474 Points Paul Sebastian (3/23/2014 11:08:00 PM)

    Your poem 'Beauty is in the Eyes of the Beholder' is superb! Great depth! Lovely poem.

  • Rookie - 27 Points Kj Force (3/23/2014 1:28:00 PM)

    Loved the flow of the words...beautifully written...

  • Rookie - 27 Points Kj Force (3/23/2014 1:27:00 PM)

    Brian... rec'd an e-mail from this site.. with a poem by bri mar..Beauty is in the eyes of the beholde r..written/published in it is 2 years later, and presented as if it was just this person you? I loved the poem and the way the words flowed and painted a picture...I couldn't find a bri mar

'' All In Your Mind ''

Who am I, what am I, why am I here,
As you accumulate knowledge all will become clear,
You ask, ‘' Who Am I '' be it daughter or son,
Remember you're unique the only one.

Throughout your existence all life you must treasure,
When you think, I am me, it will give you pleasure,
Only you can decide who you will be,
Take a look in the mirror who is it you see.

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