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  • Paul Sebastian (3/23/2014 11:20:00 PM)

    You write very well. So much you can do to make this world a better place!

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  • Paul Sebastian (3/23/2014 11:18:00 PM)

    Superbly written! ! Very inspiring for someone who is trying to understand the meaning of one's existence. Thanks.

  • Paul Sebastian (3/23/2014 11:08:00 PM)

    Your poem 'Beauty is in the Eyes of the Beholder' is superb! Great depth! Lovely poem.

  • Kj Force (3/23/2014 1:28:00 PM)

    Loved the flow of the words...beautifully written...

  • Kj Force (3/23/2014 1:27:00 PM)

    Brian... rec'd an e-mail from this site.. with a poem by bri mar..Beauty is in the eyes of the beholde r..written/published in 2012..here it is 2 years later, and presented as if it was just written...is this person you? I loved the poem and the way the words flowed and painted a picture...I couldn't find a bri mar
    kjforce

'' My Life Is Bliss ''

As I sit here dithering, I think I'm getting old,
My bones are aching my hands are cold,
It's making me bitter why should this be,
I truly feel that I'm no longer me.

You mature with age is what they say,
You start to shrink and your hair turns grey,
Surely this is not what they meant,
If that's what they say then their morals are bent.

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