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Brianna N R Wine

(9-29-1995 / USA)

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  • Robert Burns (5/10/2012 7:39:00 PM)

    BRIANNA WINE, are you sure your poem is not in fact a lie and you only tell the truth? Only in your poems do you lie to escape reality? Well,
    all I can say, is you do it beautifully. ROBERT BURNS, PORTLAND, OREGON

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  • Tameka Bester (3/7/2012 12:44:00 PM)

    i really love your poem they make me feel good inside of my body and my heart.

  • Hope Anderson (1/26/2012 7:51:00 AM)

    your poems are really amazing to read.... :) :) :) :)

Vanished

The traces of life haven't completely left me yet, but they soon will vanish.
The pain is still there…the hurt still evident.
I don't know how I became a stoic figure of life, but here I am
Life has tramped me in the dirt along with you.
Your feet I felt the most, grinding into me as I was down.
I just want to forget our time together, our brief words
Because that is all there ever was- brief words- but they meant so much.
Words are heavier than any stone and sharper than any stick.
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