BRIANNA WINE, are you sure your poem is not in fact a lie and you only tell the truth? Only in your poems do you lie to escape reality? Well,
all I can say, is you do it beautifully. ROBERT BURNS, PORTLAND, OREGON
your poems are really amazing to read.... :) :) :) :)
Another Upsetting Poem
The sigh ripples from my Throat before I can stop it. It is the sigh that I have kept encased for 16 years. It sounds of regret, dripping with loneliness. It shows the people around me that I am dissatisfied and the pity in their eyes, sears my heart.