Carniz Fatema

(06/12/1995)

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  • Tommy M. (5/6/2014 10:45:00 PM)

    Love the poem...it's really great! I just have to say please check the error on your last sentence! Your not wanted so go die with fear. The word your should be you're as in you are. Not trying to be the grammar police... just trying to help! ; -)

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Black And Red

Black and Red
The colours of dead
Black and Red
The colours of my bed.

Black and Red
swirling in my head
Black and Red
Killing my brov Ted.

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