Carniz Fatema

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  • Rookie Tommy M. (5/6/2014 10:45:00 PM)

    Love the poem...it's really great! I just have to say please check the error on your last sentence! Your not wanted so go die with fear. The word your should be you're as in you are. Not trying to be the grammar police... just trying to help! ; -)

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The Blackest Gift

It is a night of death, a song of darkness,
Wolves vent their howls,
The dark one wakens.

Evil shrouds her stalking form, an impatient agony.
Her black hair cascades over pale and tragic shoulders, and her full blood red lips part slightly, to taste the blood streaming from the pale flesh beneath her.
Now a night of darkness, I awaken from the mist, i can smell the blood and evil in the air like a thick perfume, and when she walks in, the air is sucked out of the room, her black hair c

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