Carniz Fatema

Rookie (06/12/1995)

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  • Rookie Tommy M. (5/6/2014 10:45:00 PM)

    Love the's really great! I just have to say please check the error on your last sentence! Your not wanted so go die with fear. The word your should be you're as in you are. Not trying to be the grammar police... just trying to help! ; -)

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My love for sally is so great,
my heart melts for her 'til the dusk of day.
The night colours when her's away,
walk, sing 'til day's dawn.

Her beauty is great,
Wondering mind 'til her sees,
playing is all I do,
While waiting for the moment, for her to say 'I do.'

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