Carniz Fatema

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  • Rookie Tommy M. (5/6/2014 10:45:00 PM)

    Love the's really great! I just have to say please check the error on your last sentence! Your not wanted so go die with fear. The word your should be you're as in you are. Not trying to be the grammar police... just trying to help! ; -)

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Alone In Darkness

The night falls without a sound, cold and alone are we.
The emotion for which you sacrifice yourself flares once, then dies, swept away by madness all hope must sicken and die.
Your heart beats no more. How could you cause such hurt?
Our dark thoughts surround us, crying, we ahve lost our way.

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