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celia hinojosa

(8/24/97 / california)

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  • Shannon Atherton (5/13/2012 12:24:00 PM)

    I saw your comment about me... I am touched that you think that of my work. I wanted to say that I am intrigued by and like the way you write abstractedly, and 'I'm tired' was so good it literally made me cry. Keep it up :)

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  • Shannon Atherton (5/13/2012 12:21:00 PM)

    I saw your comment about me... I'm touched that you like my work. I wanted to let you know that I like the way you write abstractedly, and your poem 'I'm Tired' literally made me cry. Keep it up :)

in my eyes

when your look in my eyes what do you see?
do you see the pain or the anger i hold inside?
what do you see in my eyes?
maybe only the brown color of my pupil
or a tear wanting to cry out
in my eyes you should see the bravery and the strength i have too look into your eyes.
and when you look in my eyes i tell you what others don't
in my eyes you can tell my emotions and my thoughts
when you look in my eyes you can see that their actually more than eyes

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