Charlie F. Kane

Rookie (14/1/1989 / Solihull, Birmingham)

Comments about Charlie F. Kane

  • Rookie Hamid Kareem (2/28/2008 7:40:00 AM)

    hi i like your poems they are very good. i would like to add you to my friends list if you are willing. i really would very much like you to check my poems and comment freely.

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Attempted Sonnet

You asked, “Why don’t you write me a sonnet? ”
To be honest I’m not very good at rhyme,
Ten syllables sounds like a big struggle,
I wouldn’t stick to fourteen lines in it.
So I’m not going to do any of that.

I thought about stealing lines
From some other poems,
But I thought you’d realize what they were.

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