Cody Brewer Poems

My first poem, Im looking for inspiration, I could use some help or criticism, not spell checked, I just wrote it like 5 minutes ago: D I hope its worth something

I dont want to be a machine,
Water does me good,
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Pointing my finger,
It seems all I can do,

Put On the spot,
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I hate to see you go,
Pride is too much,
too much to overcome,
What is love....
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Noone really sees.
But I do,
Noone really cares,
Same with me.
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