David McLansky

Freshman - 778 Points [David McLansky] (5/24/1944 / New York City)

Comments about David McLansky

  • Rookie Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/7/2014 6:50:00 AM)

    nice poems. you are great in showing feels.that shows a good improvement. i invite you to read my poems at my poets page. that is a friendly invitation

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  • Rookie - 442 Points Dilantha Gunawardana (4/5/2014 12:00:00 PM)

    You're an exceptional poet........Your vocabulary is intense and your range of poetry is astounding..........am a fan and I read your first poem casually (tombstone one) but it spurred me on............do keep on writing and you will shake PM with your poetry!

  • Rookie Jay Hall (3/30/2014 9:06:00 AM)

    I enjoy your poems. Thanks for sharing.

  • Rookie - 31 Points Elisha Wilson (7/15/2013 4:56:00 AM)

    David you write great poems.

  • Freshman - 778 Points David Mclansky (4/5/2013 4:32:00 AM)

    Thank you, very much.. David

The Cloak

The Cloak

Give to me
Your web of sorrow
And I will weave it
On the morrow
Into a cloth of shimmering gold
Interlaced with spells of old,
Chants against the days of sadness,
Armor for the days of madness;
Protecting hearts not meant to be
Stunned by life's harsh threnody.

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