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Death's Shadow

(5/15/95 / vermont)

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  • Venus Palermo (4/24/2012 4:28:00 PM)

    Hi, how can I contact you about using this poem of you? Thanks.

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We sit upon the cool grass,
Not saying a word,
As the sun slowly dips behind the trees.
The sky is painted with hues of red and pink,
As I stifle a yawn,
Wanting to stay out till the very end.
Tonight is special,
Because the rules were broken,
And sunsets are sacred,
Because they were ours.

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