(09/1965 / Australia)

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  • Jan Eagan (4/2/2013 1:02:00 PM)

    Oh dear tortured soul thou art
    My heart bleeds for thee
    The aching cries of your sweet heart
    Are bared for all to see

    'Tis tortuous to mourn a love once known but too far lost
    And bleed forever, with your life and heart to be the cost

    But go now, dear sweetest one
    Be released from your tortured pain

    For you deserve to love and know its sweetness once again

    Please wake up and cleanse your heart and soul and youth once more
    And live a life of love and happiness
    Your hopes and dreams restored

    For what a great loss you will realize
    You've allowed to take your life

    If at the end of your time here you wake to finally hear
    The sound of your own heart screaming...do you hear...

    Oh what greater loss I gave myself than she ever could
    When I let my life slip away in darkness as I never knew I would

    So please take this chance to let go and let God
    Restore your heart and soul
    with hope and a second chance at life to breathe in and behold

    Goodbye my dear fear not, oh please
    About what may have been
    And please take this chance to live and laugh and love another again


    (Original, by me.)

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  • Jan Eagan (4/2/2013 1:01:00 PM)

    Oh dear tortured soul thou art
    My heart bleeds for thee
    The aching cries of your sweet heart
    Are bared for all to see

    'Tis tortuous to mourn a love once known but too far lost
    And bleed forever, with your life and heart to be the cost

    But go now, dear sweetest one
    Be released from your tortured pain

    For you deserve to love and know its sweetness once again

    Please wake up and cleanse your heart and soul and youth once more
    And live a life of love and happiness
    Your hopes and dreams restored

    For what a great loss you will realize
    You've allowed to take your life

    If at the end of your time here you wake to finally hear
    The sound of your own heart screaming...do you hear...

    Oh what greater loss I gave myself than she ever could
    When I let my life slip away in darkness as I never knew I would

    So please take this chance to let go and let God
    Restore your heart and soul
    with hope and a second chance at life to breathe in and behold

    Goodbye my dear fear not, oh please
    About what may have been
    And please take this chance to live and laugh and love another again


    (Original, by me.)

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  • Jan Eagan (4/2/2013 12:58:00 PM)

    Oh dear tortured soul thou art
    My heart bleeds for thee
    The aching cries of your sweet heart
    Are bared for all to see

    'Tis tortuous to mourn a love once known but too far lost
    And bleed forever, with your life and heart to be the cost

    But go now, dear sweetest one
    Be released from your tortured pain

    For you deserve to love and know its sweetness once again

    Please wake up and cleanse your heart and soul and youth once more
    And live a life of love and happiness
    Your hopes and dreams restored

    For what a great loss you will realize
    You've allowed to take your life

    If at the end of your time here you wake to finally hear
    The sound of your own heart screaming...do you hear...

    Oh what greater loss I gave myself than she ever could
    When I let my life slip away in darkness as I never knew I would

    So please take this chance to let go and let God
    Restore your heart and soul
    with hope and a second chance at life to breathe in and behold

    Goodbye my dear fear not, oh please
    About what may have been
    And please take this chance to live and laugh and love another again

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.

in my mind...

At first I thought I was dreaming
and that I had to open my eyes to get out
but after a few times of trying
I just wanted to shout
It seems i'm trapped in this world
with no way to leave
no way to see
or any way to breathe
I dont know how im going to get out

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