Rookie - 35 Points (09/1965 / Australia)

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  • Rookie Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:16:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

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  • Freshman - 1,020 Points Richard Beevor (5/8/2014 3:34:00 PM)

    Hi, loved A crack in time, brilliant work

My Blue Velvet Roseā€¦

I look out in my garden of celestial dreams
And I discover things don't exist as it seems
I reach out for what isn't really there
Stretching out much further than I ever dare

Only seeing shadows that are far beyond arms reach
I find there are lessons that I just cannot teach
My lonely eyes are wide open with a starry glaze
But they get all fogged up within a misty haze

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