If that phone rings across the other line,
just one more time,
I don't know how much longer I can keep my mind.
Because you're not going to pick up,
I'll end up again hanging up.
If I have to hear a message machine
the only directive I can leave is 'Shut up! '
Honestly,
Delilah Miller is a promising young poet. She is imaginative and uses excellent descriptive skills coupled with fine poetic insight. I recommend a close watch on her writing, she is truly on the move! Rgds, Ivan
I enjoyed reading your poem (Hopeful) it all came together excellently! !
Thad
Reading your poetry is so refreshing- keep doin' what you're doin'!
You've got a lot of passion burning in you. Does it show, or is it contained quietly in your writing? Either way, I think there's honesty in your fire. Kudos.