Treasure Island

Denis Martindale


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  • Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:49:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

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  • Sylvia L. Wisner Molina (5/16/2014 8:36:00 PM)

    Absolutely Beautiful! ! ! ! !

  • Gergana Teofilova (5/9/2014 4:22:00 AM)

    I think your works are fantastic, sir! The first poem I read by you inspired me to write my own one on the same subject. Thanks! I hope to become at least half as good as you some day!

  • Gleb Zavlanov (10/5/2013 6:03:00 PM)

    You're an amazing, prolific poet and I really admire your work. Thanks for sharing such genius with all the poets on poemhunter!

  • Gleb Zavlanov (7/20/2013 8:20:00 PM)

    Thanks for all the tips and suggestions. They were very meaningful and helpful. I will try to improve my poems over the next week.

Temptation

Temptation comes in many forms they're mostly human, though...
At first temptation gently warms, then boils to overflow!
As humans we're weak as water! What strength can we provide?
When we don't do what we oughta, billions of sighs are sighed!
Man's conscience warns and gives us pause, Reflect, repent, resist!
Yet even if we know God's laws, temptation will persist!
We try at first to turn away...We fight against delight!
Yet few are they who strive all day and fight with all their

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