Derrick Clark

Rookie (04-25-81 / tulare california)

Comments about Derrick Clark

  • Rookie Gold Flower (6/10/2007 1:29:00 PM)

    Your poems are amazing! They are so true!
    Keep writing!
    Lilly

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  • Rookie Jade Nameless (5/21/2007 9:35:00 AM)

    Thank you for commenting on my poems, feel free to any time! I like your poems, too.
    Peace and <3
    Jade

33: Years out of exile

All my life, it felt like I was in a atonement for enternity.
Trap in this mental prison called the system.
As I am the prey, while they is the predator.
Running for dear life, to escape this mental carnage.
Wondering why I, have to experience so much failure and pain.
Coming with a solution, to starve out this beast.
Reaching within myself, to bring out this hidden warrior.
That ready to unleash his fury.
Knowing the key weapon is sacrifice and will.

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