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Dipy Hermonite


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  • Goldheart Bird (8/20/2013 2:26:00 PM)

    Hi Dipy! I really enjoy reading your poems! Keep up the awesome work!

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  • Christine Mc|cherry (8/18/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    Dipy, your words are very moving. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for getting in touch.
    You write from the heart. That is where poetry should come from. Keep writing.

  • Pasquale Dimeola (6/11/2007 3:15:00 PM)

    Dipy- Of your two poems, I preferred 'Child'. It is touching and sad. I saw a sight in Naples, Italy that was almost similiar. However in my case, the child had a despicable mother instead of a hard working father. You can read the poem I wrote in reference to it titled 'Circumvesuviana Lamentation'. Your poem 'The Silently Weeping Tree, ' has its moments, however personally I have not been one to humanize objects or animals in lieu of human suffering. There are too many people suffering to concern myself with other life forms. Interesting poetry-Keep at it! -Pasquale

Please Don't Kill Me

On the slopes of the mountains
The pine trees - looking so swell
The breeze through them seems to be singing
The birds look so happy and well
But away in the distance
A lonesome old Tree seems so sad
It seems to be pleading to the fellow
Who's chopping it down with his axe

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