Dom Hunt

(17/04/1966 / geelong)

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  • Susan Eltone (7/22/2012 6:41:00 PM)

    Dom, Happiness; good use of asimile and metaphor, nicely written. T Love You Are The Words; unrequited love. part of life lessons. Was This Always You; very prospective, people do change part of the core of character remains unchanged. I like your style of prose. Good work, I sense you put some serious effort in your work. Stay in touch, Eltone

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It's lifts it pulls

It's lifts and pulls
It changes
It grows
It comes from nowhere
But never leaves
Makes you feel complete
But can kill you too
It feels light
Then feels heavy
It can twist your heart
And lifts your soul 
We cannot  live without it
For it is in us 
It's makes us whole

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