Don Tiedemann

Rookie - 52 Points (2/23/1950 / Baltimore, Md)

Comments about Don Tiedemann

  • Rookie - 0 Points Brian Purdy (1/5/2012 11:24:00 PM)

    To the writer: Liked your poem 'I Know...'. Feel, however, that poem might better conclude with second last stanza, which I find both witty and truthful. Present conclusion seems to add nothing the poem might do very well without.

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  • Rookie Julie Vognar (1/4/2012 6:52:00 AM)

    Yes, I like them too.

  • Rookie - 63 Points John Raubenheimer (1/3/2012 8:05:00 PM)

    I like your poems Don. It's encouraging to find a poet of your calibre on these pages.

Cold Morning

In the morning when worry
shakes your shoulder

tell him you would sleep
a little more.

The jet streams dips, the world
is growing colder,

and any bear will tell you
sleeping is what winter's for

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