Don Tiedemann

Rookie - 76 Points (2/23/1950 / Baltimore, Md)

Comments about Don Tiedemann

  • Brian Purdy (1/5/2012 11:24:00 PM)

    To the writer: Liked your poem 'I Know...'. Feel, however, that poem might better conclude with second last stanza, which I find both witty and truthful. Present conclusion seems to add nothing the poem might do very well without.

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  • Julie Vognar (1/4/2012 6:52:00 AM)

    Yes, I like them too.

  • John Raubenheimer (1/3/2012 8:05:00 PM)

    I like your poems Don. It's encouraging to find a poet of your calibre on these pages.

Migration

The honking geese
are flying low.
They winter near
here on the lake
and marshes. Out back
their sound recedes.
It falters to
a silence, like
an orchestra
tuning, or
a gaggle of
children boarding
a bus.

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