Don Tiedemann

Rookie - 76 Points (2/23/1950 / Baltimore, Md)

Comments about Don Tiedemann

  • Brian Purdy (1/5/2012 11:24:00 PM)

    To the writer: Liked your poem 'I Know...'. Feel, however, that poem might better conclude with second last stanza, which I find both witty and truthful. Present conclusion seems to add nothing the poem might do very well without.

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  • Julie Vognar (1/4/2012 6:52:00 AM)

    Yes, I like them too.

  • John Raubenheimer (1/3/2012 8:05:00 PM)

    I like your poems Don. It's encouraging to find a poet of your calibre on these pages.


The honking geese
are flying low.
They winter near
here on the lake
and marshes. Out back
their sound recedes.
It falters to
a silence, like
an orchestra
tuning, or
a gaggle of
children boarding
a bus.

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