Dwi utami

Rookie - 3 Points (11-11-1986 / Ngawi.jawa timur)

Comments about Dwi utami

  • Rookie Aiyub Momaya (8/2/2010 7:14:00 PM)

    Very Very Very good poems
    i hope you will go up


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  • Rookie Subhajit Biswas (7/16/2010 5:05:00 AM)

    Your poem 'The one goad' i read here. And great and osam poem of the month in poemhunter i think.. Thanks to for create a great poem... Subho,

I'Need a kiss

Sunday is a holiday then we are going to that place.
That silent place full of silence, we are there standing,
we saw the so many coloured greenish leaves big trees.
so many birds, and butterflies decorating the blue sky
Then a butterfly dancing in the sky.
Together we Keep a released longing.
sitting near in the shallow river.
We see fishes in the depth so calm
We look up at the rainbow in the sky.

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