Eli MorenoDrew

Eli MorenoDrew Poems

It is my belief,
That you have been held captive
in the City of Angels.
Angels force you to model and
...

Now once there was a story of a plight,
Of a man that spoke of great fright.
He stood on the corner
Like a small stature mourner
...

I wish that I could pick up a guitar
And play a song for you that's beautiful.
Each chord would melt you 'til your eyes were pools
And you would glow as if you were a star!
...

Don't rhyme, Poetry.
Our thoughts and tongues don't think that way.
Steer clear of meter, sweet Poetry.
I'm tired of counting and scanning.
...

You rare, odd beauty.
How can something like you
Insist on confusing not only
My mind, but the minds of others?
...

From a martyr’s point of view,
I’ve messed up things countless times.
Some you’ve noticed, some you haven’t.
But what keeps me in awe,
...

Love is an understatement
of what I have for you.
It’s a shame the word is so extreme
Because what we have is
...

Now what can be more beautiful than her
Soft face? I’ve thought and thought about it long.
Not even fields of daffodils or song
Can measure to the light she brings I’m sure.
...

My ears and memory
are the encyclopedia to the sounds you make.
The grunts, moans, laughs, and sighs are all listed
In alphabetical order starting from
...

Maybe my admiration
For Jacques Brel
Lies solely in the fact
That I can’t understand him
...

Now I know how my mother felt
I cannot pull out of this driveway,
I ask you: Please put on your seatbelt.
...

These hands,
calloused and dry
like my sense of humor
are scarred and tremble
...

A pirate searched for a treasure,
'Twas all he thought about.
He knew it'd bring him pleasure
And flustered, he let out a shout!
...

Dearly beloved,
We gather here today to witness
In fact two dearly beloveds.
...

Does the bird know the song
it sings by heart?
Or does it simply whistle it's tune
Different from the start?
...

I’ve come to realize
That the Beatles are an
Over-rated British band
Without you singing along with them
...

1.
Open your eyes and
you will see, the rights and truth
of a Country, free.
...

18.

When we travel the world
I’ll be sure to bring a camera.
That way I can say I’ve seen
Beautiful places,
...

Buses don't have
random drawings telling you
where you're going.
They especially don't accept
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Eli MorenoDrew Biography

Hey everyone! I'm 18 and live in a up-in-coming town called El Centro. Well i've been writing poetry for about two years now. Not to toot my own horn, but it just comes really naturally to me. My mom (who sadly was my English Teacher) taught me all the elements of poetry which i already know completely by heart. Some of my poems are good, some aren't. It's like sports, ya win some ya lose some. I also notice that i have Amadeus syndrome where i really don't like to change what i've written. I'm completely open to suggestions and criticisms. Thank everyone soooo much! i really appreciate it.)

The Best Poem Of Eli MorenoDrew

Prisoner Of Angels

It is my belief,
That you have been held captive
in the City of Angels.
Angels force you to model and
have the time of your life,
Just so I can miss you.

And they sent out spy Angels
to spy on me so you don't leave my head.
They mess with my car to make it drive
past your house.
And they convince you to call me
while I write this.
And they rig my random music to play the songs
that remind me of you.
Just so I can miss you.

I'd hate to be the Devil
But I would if it meant I could
Fight these Angels.
To free you,
and me
Just so I won't miss you.

Eli MorenoDrew Comments

s aye 11 January 2015

Your poems are quite profound. Something about them rings.

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Aaron Tate 17 January 2008

Your style hopefully will pull in more poets someday soon.: D I hope mine does. And not just poets but other things too. People relie on others for inspiration, so lets give it to em!

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