Thank you for publishing poems of Elizabeth Daryush. I found one of her poems by chance in our copy of The Oxford Book of CHRISTIAN VERSE. The title of the poem is 'How on solemn fields of space...'
It's a fine poem, once I scramble the words around to see them from the beginning. I think the scrambling helps get the meaning of the poem. Atter the scrambling, though, I replace them to where I found them. Undisturbed, I hope.
Best regards, Maggie Hurll
Above the grey down Gather, wan, the glows; Relieved by leaden Gleams a star-gang goes;
In the dark valley Here and there enters A spark, laggardly, For the faint watchers