Divinity is nothing, but an abstract essence... Poetry comes from the mind and emotions, not from imaginary person talking to you... Remember that true emotions only come from a conscious mind, one that can think thoroughly before writing... So get a new philosophy, something concrete to support your writing... As yours just makes you look insane...
Heaven Of GOD
I do not desire a heaven of God I am unhappy with His world of war Planet is trembling, God is smiling Peace has no place, it is fugitive.
I do not desire a heaven of God Where angels smile like roses And bees kiss lips of flowers Dancing rivers are flowing from the sky.