Divinity is nothing, but an abstract essence... Poetry comes from the mind and emotions, not from imaginary person talking to you... Remember that true emotions only come from a conscious mind, one that can think thoroughly before writing... So get a new philosophy, something concrete to support your writing... As yours just makes you look insane...
I walk under penchant I live in grief I set fire to the house of bliss And dance with invisible me.
No one knows my mind I am servant of wealth I want to be a free agent By becoming captive