Fay Slimm

Rookie - 86 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Comments about Fay Slimm

  • Shashendra Amalshan (7/23/2009 12:37:00 AM)

    Hello Fay! ! ! !
    hey, you write beautiful pieces indeed......
    i loved your ones.. filled with words of love.. and a good friend too...
    your writing reflect what a lovely lady you are.... thanks for sharing your poems with the world..! ! !

    with love
    shan

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (4/5/2009 1:40:00 AM)

    I put my money on you.. you are a winner! ! !

  • Rupa U (1/15/2009 1:26:00 AM)

    You are one of the few very good poets I have so far come across on this site. Congratulations!

  • Jerry Hughes (12/30/2008 4:55:00 PM)

    Agree totally with Chris Savin's comments. Fay is a 'thinking' writer and I congratulate her
    on her excellent work. Sincerely, Jerry Hughes

  • Kris Smith (12/11/2008 12:56:00 PM)

    Fay is one of the outstanding poets on PH the content and subject matter is so varied and always has the reader occupied. She is a kind and warm poet who comments other peoples work with great dignity. It is a credit that PH has this lovely person as a member. Keep going Fay, Chris

  • Fabio Ricardo Vieira (9/14/2008 1:33:00 PM)

    Hi Fay, i read some of your poetries, they are really amazing, but this to my is the best.
    Cheers

  • James Timothy Jarrett (7/29/2008 8:47:00 PM)

    Absolutely wonderful. If only I could plant a midnight garden with that group. You have made me feel your joy. Thank you.

Best Poem of Fay Slimm

A New You.

Close your eyes and gently walk
Down dreamy Memory Lane.
Now stoop to pick and smell the flowers.
Choose just short stays - or stay for hours!
You're happy once again.
You're YOU.

Feel release right through your frame.
Your heart begins to breathe.
With stress gone, grasp this slower pace,
Relax - you're in a different place
And never want to leave.
You're a new YOU.

Examine what you feel right now.
What words spring to your mind?
Lightness? Freedom? Relief and Bliss?
Remember these so you'll not miss
The rescue you will ...

Read the full of A New You.

Only Venn

How often would my phone go - then a voice would say
'It s only Venn'.
A soft and gentle Cornish tone
Would whisper low into the phone
As if excusing, say again
'Hello my love - it s only Venn'


My unassuming humble friend

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