Fay Slimm

Rookie - 33 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Comments about Fay Slimm

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (7/23/2009 12:37:00 AM)

    Hello Fay! ! ! !
    hey, you write beautiful pieces indeed......
    i loved your ones.. filled with words of love.. and a good friend too...
    your writing reflect what a lovely lady you are.... thanks for sharing your poems with the world..! ! !

    with love
    shan

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  • Rookie - 191 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (4/5/2009 1:40:00 AM)

    I put my money on you.. you are a winner! ! !

  • Rookie Rupa U (1/15/2009 1:26:00 AM)

    You are one of the few very good poets I have so far come across on this site. Congratulations!

  • Veteran Poet - 1,336 Points Jerry Hughes (12/30/2008 4:55:00 PM)

    Agree totally with Chris Savin's comments. Fay is a 'thinking' writer and I congratulate her
    on her excellent work. Sincerely, Jerry Hughes

  • Rookie Kris Smith (12/11/2008 12:56:00 PM)

    Fay is one of the outstanding poets on PH the content and subject matter is so varied and always has the reader occupied. She is a kind and warm poet who comments other peoples work with great dignity. It is a credit that PH has this lovely person as a member. Keep going Fay, Chris

  • Rookie Fabio Ricardo Vieira (9/14/2008 1:33:00 PM)

    Hi Fay, i read some of your poetries, they are really amazing, but this to my is the best.
    Cheers

  • Rookie - 173 Points James Timothy Jarrett (7/29/2008 8:47:00 PM)

    Absolutely wonderful. If only I could plant a midnight garden with that group. You have made me feel your joy. Thank you.

Best Poem of Fay Slimm

A Pure Love.

As the snowdropp sea of glistening white
Envelopes and amazes me, I, standing
Here in a woodland clearing think of mighty
Love. This waving scene of purity hangs
It's every head of gleam shyly downward
In a modest pose, but lift each face and
Look at love so pure it takes us forward
In accepting states of grace that random
Fate never planned, but rather Godly love
Created. They glow with light, and scented
Subtly, are as fresh as dawn. Just above
This ocean of delight hangs, relentless,
January sky which now threatens rain.
Pure love is snowdropp white ...

Read the full of A Pure Love.

Spring Fever.

Sing SPRING, and feel the thrust of newborn thing.
Spring-warmed sun arouses earth,
Then blazons dormant trees to work.
Roots awake, and crawling, shyly nudge and shake each branch.
Soil breaks next, with rank on lush green rank of shoot.
And buds unfurl.
Colours zing, as blossoming life begins again
To sting old winters indolent sleep. Breathe this resurrection theme.
Sink this bursting spring-like dream deep to feed on all year through.

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