(11/5/2006 8:53:00 AM)
Read my poems and, rate and give comments too please!
(11/5/2006 8:47:00 AM)
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i always remember someone's saying written in his book, I don't quite remember his name actually. But he said like this, '...since it takes imagination to learn language'- i just think that all of us who join this site must be language lovers who like to create something using words-so why don't we just use our imagination, write it freely as it will give others new ideas and clear description about something then share it by sending it=] just simple... but the effect is not quite as that simple.thanks God that there is PoemHunter.com, i love it much.
(11/2/2006 8:47:00 AM)
Have any of you guys read Ben Jacobson's poem Feast of Booths, i think it's really good. Arthur Rimbaud like. It's not to over complicated as so many poems often are, it's just right.
The poet known as kiibaati
(10/30/2006 11:47:00 AM)
in writing poetry
there are only two rules
give your verses some mystery
and let your words be tools
(10/25/2006 11:54:00 AM)
Read my poems and please rate and give comments too!
(10/20/2006 4:57:00 PM)
Hi all.. never tried to write anything before.. today was a first for me after a recent split with my fiance.. honest opinions would be appreciated
Erhard Hans Josef Lang
(10/18/2006 8:54:00 PM)
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Dear poets, one small, but substantial change was made to my latest poem
Eclipsing Untimely Queues On Whims Of Practical Intuition,
which has made it all the more readable now, as I think, in its final form. Still, I'm always open to any suggestions by yourselves on matters of how to improve on my writings linguistically, dear poets, especially by you poets born with the English tongue (I, a German, was held and spoken to as a baby for some time by a colored American G.I.'s wife who then lived with us as tenants) .
Please don't be hesitant to inform about anything in my use of language, or even of style, for that matter, in case something had striked your senses on reading my poems. Thanks a lot for your attention. It'll be a rewarding thing!
(10/14/2006 7:09:00 PM)
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hi every one my name is Evan williams i am a very new poet looking to be discovered im 16 sophmore in highschool so yeah send me a message love to hear critizism good or bad so message me i hope to hear from you all
John Michael Angelo
(10/6/2006 9:27:00 PM)
Read my poem! Fellow poets, you will surely take it with you!
(9/30/2006 10:04:00 PM)
Hello fellow poets.
I have written several poems on this site, and I have shown them to a few of my close friends and teachers. I was just looking for feedback on them, because I would love to get them published sometime in the near future. (Even though I'm only fourteen, I set extremely high goals for myself.) I would truly appreciate it if you would read them and let me know what you think! Thanks!
May the darkness embrace you,