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  • Aj Cliff (7/30/2006 3:31:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    hey everybody can people readmy poems and give pointers and such if you can please n thankyou


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  • Konjit Berhane (7/29/2006 7:24:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey there Great poets and amature ones like are you all doing
    i hope Life is treating you Well and Beyond

    well What i want to share is....while we are all in line we can't talk on this site...coz it doesn't have a chat page...

    so what do you people say that we all open a Yahoo account then when we are online we can share our most of all our unique ideas...and social lives...what do you people say to this Grand

    well if anyone address is

    see you all in Messanger of yahoo....

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  • Mathew Lewis (7/16/2006 2:23:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hey abdul. I can't boast on being a good poet but my suggestion to you would be dont force it. It doesn't matter if the words are good enough. If they're good enough for you they're good enough for the world.

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    • Konjit Berhane (7/20/2006 10:30:00 AM) Post reply

      Well Well abdul first welcome and what i want to say is i have the same problem so what i suggest we do is that i have stoped writing and started to read then may be i might improve but the thing is t ... more

  • Abdul Basit (7/10/2006 11:18:00 PM) Post reply | Read 3 replies

    sup ppl..m a newcomer not in poetry..just in here well ive bn writing for not much long but still my poems suck, well the problem with them is that they arent omplex, they are too basic like a 7 year old kid scribbled sum poems....i wanna make em luk complex, deep, compelling the reader to read it few more times to understand completely..if any gud poet like ta help me sort my weaknesses i wud very much appreciate that,


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    • Ernest Mayer (7/14/2006 11:25:00 PM) Post reply

      i wouldn't worry. your stuff is pretty good.

    • Eddie Loughran (7/12/2006 6:36:00 AM) Post reply

      I don't think your poems 'suck'! If you aren't happy with them, work on them ultil you are, and don't post them until they are up to your standards. But I still like them!

    • Richard Cock III (7/11/2006 1:18:00 PM) Post reply

      your stuff ain't bad. your just going through mad shit right now. just keep on writing.

  • Maddi Eden (7/10/2006 1:47:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey Everyone!
    I'm new to, and I have added nine poems I've written over the last six weeks.
    I'd really appreciate it if you could read, and comment, on them

  • Mathew Lewis (7/7/2006 6:15:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hey guys and girls. I know this isn't technically what this page is about but I've just posted a poem called Angel eyes and I'd really appreciate you reading it. I dont know if its any good but its about something really close to my heart and it would be great if you could comment on it. Thanks all.

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    • Aldo Kraas (1/26/2007 8:27:00 PM) Post reply

      The angel eye poem is amazing It is very deep BY reading the poem I can see that you ar very romantic And like company Also you like angels

  • Red Blooded Black Hearted (6/26/2006 9:22:00 PM) Post reply

    Hey all! ! ! ! I only started on poemhunter this year and am still a baby on poem writing. I was wondering if u all could help me, all or most o my poems are rhymes and I was wondering of any techniques on writing without rhyme.

    Hugs, Rissa: -)

  • Dana Tyrrell (6/26/2006 7:24:00 PM) Post reply

    hello all.
    ive been having a bit of a draught of fresh ideas and inspiration for new poems...can anyone help?

  • Richard Cock III (6/26/2006 1:07:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Posted some new stuff. Have a look, if you DARE...

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    • Aldo Kraas (1/26/2007 8:38:00 PM) Post reply

      All the title for your poems are horrible You send the wrong message The message that i get is that You don't know right from wrong The poem Old lady should be title Senior or Elder You don't ha ... more

  • Tamara Moir (6/25/2006 4:51:00 AM) Post reply

    Hello, I just put a poem on this site, and I was wondering if anyone would mind reading it and giving me some feedback? It is called 'Jealousy Got The Best Of Her'

    http: // poet=101568&poem=3690835

    Thank-you in advance

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