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  • Rookie Breaking Allegiance (1/5/2013 10:27:00 PM) Post reply
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    I'm kind of like.. a beginner, so can you please critique my poetry? I love to hear your opinions! Good or bad. Thanks.

  • Rookie - 8 Points Sharron Stephenson (1/3/2013 5:24:00 AM) Post reply

    can someone please help i have a problem i can pnly write in black and someone i know has stolen my pen and it was the only one i could use what should i do

  • Rookie Sarrah Murtaza (1/3/2013 3:10:00 AM) Post reply

    Please spare a moment to read my poems. It is my small contribution to the society we live in...
    i will appreciate your feedback.

  • Rookie - 605 Points Kavya . (1/2/2013 1:04:00 AM) Post reply

    hi have posted a new poem today LIED TRUTH..Please give your valuable comments. Thanx.

  • Rookie David Crapper (12/31/2012 3:49:00 PM) Post reply


    Oblivion; eddies, tender tit-
    illation, spearheaded fluctuation;
    egressing from throat's abyss, our Father
    and Mother's virgin tongues lock in tranquil bliss.

    Por que brilliance bore membrane, Por qué?Porque!
    without porqué explodes synergies sin-
    gularity. Theories relativ-
    ity; therefore E=MC²!

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ronald Britcher (12/31/2012 10:27:00 AM) Post reply

    -In the wake of a pupil-
    Our hearts become virtual
    I stand here waiting on our
    Waiting hopeful

    -With one single hand-
    Can become a single stand
    As He reaches out
    I will Walk As planned

    -We all rise when we are spoken to-
    And we all fall when we are let go.
    To all become a family
    Or to all Behold

    -Light is a passion-
    Darkness is a Desire
    God is our hopeful
    Devil shall be retired

    -God is the truth-
    While religion has its requires
    At the end of the day the one above
    Is who acquires.

    -The world is an apocalypse-
    From dawn to dusk
    Let us keep our faith in him
    Or end dusk to dusk

    -I knee down before you Jesus-
    While keeping my faith
    I will walk with you Jesus
    My soul for you to take

  • Rookie Michael Peters (12/29/2012 3:26:00 PM) Post reply


    Marginal grass of recognition dwells
    Near water of truth which in
    Return is a house to harrier's nest
    For his/hers deserted venter of entity.

    What does it mean?Who knows?
    Don Giovanni's opera's in the house.
    Rubish words of distorted mind perhaps?
    Well, shall we then get another schnaps?

    Fill our heads with this no more.
    It is better to go home
    And forget that all this hustle
    Is as meaningless as Rousseau.

    Savage's instinct that dictates
    That our life's have been in vain.
    That our rations are but rations
    Of a belly of our envy.

    Green eyed monster of possession
    Wants destruction of the way
    Of our life's that's in the way
    Of it walking upstraight's sessions.

    Shall we give in to it then?
    Let our guard down, be subservient
    To a notion that is rational
    But so hard with intuition?

  • Rookie - 369 Points Stephen W (12/29/2012 2:49:00 PM) Post reply

    A lot of postings on here seem to have strayed from the stated purpose of this forum.
    So I will post a tip: Carry a little writing pad and pen/pencil with you at all times.
    In the UK small pens can be found lying on the pavement outside betting shops.

  • Rookie - 899 Points Godfrey Morris (12/29/2012 12:42:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Euphoric dream

    of this we do long for
    our desires intertwine
    at this placid place
    where hope hindges beyond
    all forsaken realms
    a dream promised amongst
    the desserted hearts

    the light that will cure
    all desolate souls

    but this earth
    - a sphere
    not all so plain and fair

    yet still we wonder
    we crave our euphoric dream
    this dream may never be
    though - through the mind
    we shall see
    it be free

    copyright [c] godfrey morris

    Godfrey Morris

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  • Rookie - 75 Points Sanjibsaha Aniketa (12/26/2012 6:48:00 AM) Post reply

    Beauty of love

    This is the
    Teen girl! -
    I have ever
    Seen her.
    Do you entrust me long,
    I will cover you up,
    With the mountain herbs
    And kindle the beauty,
    Beauty of love.

    Sanjibsaha Aniketa

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