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Writing Poetry


Discuss ways to improve your poetry. Post your techniques, tips, and creative ideas about how to write better.
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ZhaoNian (Michael) Chen Male, 25, United States (2/18/2005 7:37:00 PM)

Hi all,
I am relatively new at poetry, Can anyone look at my poems and give me some suggestions please?

Thanks

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  • louis sacre croix (2/24/2005 1:35:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi Michael.
    I liked your sixth poem, very much.
    You need to stop worrying so much about rhyming or not and telling a story and try to paint the picture of what you are feeling.
    Once you paint the picture in your mind onto the page and feel it right. It should look like a picture and not just an essay or a bunch of words.

    Keep going I think you know where to head and that's a positive :)
    Anne

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