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Sarah Elise Female, 21, United States (7/5/2005 7:15:00 PM)

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but it didnt last
now its all in the past


hows that sound?

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  • Abdul Sattar (7/14/2005 8:43:00 PM) Post reply

    Good attempt thank you!

  • John Wittle (7/13/2005 4:26:00 PM) Post reply

    I think she wanted 3 more lines, so I'd do something that rhymes with Grief and Relief for the last line. Kinda hard when you have an odd number of lines.

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