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Joseph Alvarez United States (11/19/2013 11:27:00 AM)

empty

a universal word
infinitely descriptive
I feel empty.
my home is empty.
my heart is empty.

finding people to fill it
isn't as easy as it portrays
im not looking for love
im looking for passion

pour your emotions into me
and fill my heart.
fill my home.
fill me.

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  • Unknown But Will Be (5/12/2014 3:08:00 PM) Post reply

    I love this, Its so relatable... keep up the good writing!

  • Levi Hopler (12/12/2013 10:25:00 PM) Post reply

    As one who suffers from this, I understand wholly. Excellent execution. I would say to perhaps lengthen it, but I try not to recommend such often; poetry is as long as poetry needs to be to sing its message.

  • Doris Cornago (12/8/2013 9:52:00 AM) Post reply

    Hi Joseph:

    I was in the process of posting an answer to your request in the poem (fill me) but the system suffered a glitch. You might try looking at my poem " To Him Who Pleads Fill Me" . I hope you get some relief from my contribution. Keep on. Look for love and passion, even if you do not expect to find them. It is the searching that counts when writing a poem. Thank you for inspiring my poem.

    Phoenix

  • Colleen Gaida (11/29/2013 12:21:00 PM) Post reply

    Perfectly expressed! Beautiful.

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