Poetics and Poetry Discussion
(3/3/2005 1:10:00 AM)
I think thats very sweet ^^ brings back my memories of past girlfriends and how It felt when we broke up...
do not take any of my comments seriously because i'm just a year older than u, but i kinda feel that there's an anticlimax in the middle of the poem. but i LOVE, i repeat, LOVE how u ended the poem...like i said brings back memories, and even reminds me of the first poem i wrote (man's curse)
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Like a soldier's hard-earned stripes, his cuts
run across his arms, their raised shine standing out.
I am mesmerized by ...