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  • Kavya . (4/16/2013 5:32:00 AM) Post reply Stage

    hey have just attempted to add 4 more lines to ur beautiful poem:

    I kept thinking a lot and thought that I could say,
    What I feel when I'm with you, like the other day,
    Its always better, than just to hide it all the way,
    To let you know the truth, as simple as I may,
    Everything got changed and I'm asking you to stay,
    Coz, from that moment, you took my heart away.

    Trust me with you I wont play
    In the light of my life, you are the first ray
    Cuddling you in my dreams here I lay
    Make my dream a reality, Oh my dear K!

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