Poetics and Poetry Discussion
(4/16/2013 5:32:00 AM)
hey have just attempted to add 4 more lines to ur beautiful poem:
I kept thinking a lot and thought that I could say,
What I feel when I'm with you, like the other day,
Its always better, than just to hide it all the way,
To let you know the truth, as simple as I may,
Everything got changed and I'm asking you to stay,
Coz, from that moment, you took my heart away.
Trust me with you I wont play
In the light of my life, you are the first ray
Cuddling you in my dreams here I lay
Make my dream a reality, Oh my dear K!
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