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Allan james Saywell Male, 70, Australia (6/22/2013 7:16:00 AM)

Sex On A hot Tin Roof

Oh my Ass she cried
Tin does things to my flesh
My cheeks are burning
You ain't half hot honey
Can you smell something burning
Im'e cooking baby
Lets' clink our asses and toast
If we don't leave this roof
We shall be Roast
Hot potatoe honey
Lemon and lime
So sublime

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  • Freshman - 644 Points Jefferson Carter (6/22/2013 11:36:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply
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    Eeeekkk! Saypoor, you still got that talent for dumb verse! " Clink our asses" indeed!

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    • Freshman - 644 Points Allan james Saywell (6/22/2013 8:55:00 PM) Post reply

      You still writing about power poles Carter, I only clink my Ass with females on a hot tin roof Warm regards AJS

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