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  • Melody Kuku (9/25/2012 4:40:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Hi guys! Do read my poems and rate them, am sure it will be worth your time. Here is a poem, I'll really appreciate your comments.
    Strange Love
    The voice coming across the seas,
    He could smell the aroma of thick passion,
    In a gentle air.
    Strings of music play melodies foreign to the heart,
    Each pull of words string,
    Stroke the heart softly.

    Thoughts blossoming into words,
    That lick the ink of pens,
    Making the heart melt for a touch of the Ink's Master.
    Heart played against heart,
    Passion or lust?
    Love or awe?
    Of desires that strange dreams give.

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  • Navya Kumar (9/25/2012 12:16:00 AM) Post reply

    Please rate it friends

  • Daniel Einstein (9/24/2012 11:32:00 PM) Post reply

    I know you guys want people to rate and comment on your poems so that's why I am here.
    Tell me 2 favorites poems you have written and send it to me in a message
    I will then. Debate if its good or not and let you know.: } have a great time.
    Trutly yours, daniel einstein.

  • Peter Maxharya (9/24/2012 3:57:00 PM) Post reply

    Hi honarables, once again im back yet for another read, comment, rate for my new poem entitled 'i dont even see! ' yeah i dont even see u not reading it.its ur poem not mine! Nyc tym

  • Namrata Nath (9/22/2012 8:56:00 AM) Post reply

    hey guys! Ever wondered why don't we have so little time?I mean, c'mon do we even have time to watch our favourite show?It occurred to me and I composed a poem. do read it guys and tell me how's it! if you get time ;)

  • Ruby Honeytip (9/22/2012 1:12:00 AM) Post reply

    Or maybe I could enter this one instead?
    I have only just started writing poetry...but I find it really soothing: ^)

    Like a Boss

    She wants to watch the base of his throat as he throws his head back to laugh
    She wants to smell the ocean through the pine trees and hear her own soft whimper as he bends to kiss her.
    She wants to feel him whisper sweet, crazy words close to her ear and delight in the hidden shivers he brings to the depths of her
    She wants to feel the heat from his hand burn her thigh
    She wants to pull his sweet breath into her chest and hold it until she knows it has travelled to the centre of her.
    She wants permission to stand close...very close
    Can he tell that his name starts deep inside her and rings and rings and rings?.......
    Then she opens her eyes and, ever ladylike, crosses her legs, hands folded over her knees, as the world comes back to focus
    She wonders if this too shall pass
    So she can get back to work!
    Ruby Honeytip

  • Ruby Honeytip (9/22/2012 1:09:00 AM) Post reply

    I am thinking about entering my little poem into a local poetry competition.
    I really don't know if it is good enough, but it was written from the middle of my heart.
    If you could share your thoughts on my poem before I submit to the competition, I would greatly appreciate.
    I'm entering it under 'Love' category....

    Verum et Amicitia

    Do you feel the weight press against you?
    The weight of cold pressing truth.
    Does it force the guilt from your pores like oil?
    No..I see it is light as a bubble.... truth lifting its way out of you
    With a merry grin and promises of eternal friendship.
    Oh..the divine freedoms of nothing more!
    Alas, loves confusion is my bed of nails,
    And, it seems I am tucked down tight.
    My too high pillow is stuffed full of whispered wishes
    And wet with a river of tears.
    Oh what delicious torment to be started through happenstance!
    What does it matter if purity of intention,
    Holds me from freedom of heart
    If both leave me lonely?
    © Copyright 2012 Ruby Honeytip

  • Peter Maxharya (9/21/2012 11:38:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    Whatz up again poetic part people?I got a new poem straight from home kenya: 'fearfailure' enjoy ur read.

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  • Juan Ruiz (9/21/2012 11:52:00 AM) Post reply

    Hey you guys, I understand that there are a lot of people asking for you to go to their profile and rate/comment on their poems. It may be bothersome continuously seeing these kinds of comments, but it would be greatly appriciated if you would do me the great pleasure of doing so for me. It doesn't take long, it might take 2 minutes out of your day. Thank you for your support and time!

  • Lamis Fahal . (9/20/2012 8:56:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies

    Hey you all, I would love if you read my new poems and left your comments please! ! !
    Here is one

    All she wanted is to be wanted

    He hugged her and kissed her
    And you just looked and stared
    I saw that you saw her
    And didnt show me that you even cared
    You didn't say goodbye
    Or a kiss or good luck
    Didn't look in my eyes
    Didn't you feel there is something I miss
    Don't you think that it's tough for that 12 year old
    To understand your twisted love
    And stand the cold
    All that she wanted
    Is to feel your warmth
    And not feel haunted
    By that harshness of yours
    She wanted to be loved
    And see it in your eyes
    She wanted to be hugged
    But you left her
    With a feeling that never dies
    When all that she wanted
    Is really to be wanted....

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    • Lamis Fahal . Rookie - 1st Stage (9/21/2012 6:38:00 AM) Post reply

      When there is a lot you can't voice it, then the only way to let out is to word it It saves our souls, may be that's why we are expressive :) :)

    • Sun And Moon Rookie - 1st Stage (9/21/2012 2:14:00 AM) Post reply

      Nice work :) Teen poetry is always so expressive :)

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